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Originally Posted by BSIT07-01  Laro Laro...
Waisay iss tarah bhi tu likhtay hain "Hay" But India walay tu "He" bhi l;ikhtay hain... |
zaroori nahi hai.. per kuch to difference hona chahiye
ha aur
hey me.. aur meine larne wali koi baat nahi ki to larai kyon hogi.........bus chota sa suggession diya tha..
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Originally Posted by madiha han dekho kesa khush ho raha ho larai pa.wesa hamna larai to ni ki.mena to bas itna btaya ha k ma esa hi likhti hun...  |
like... dekho agar tum hey aur ha ek hi tarah type karogi to kaise ho jayega..
kch khawab ha jinko likhna ha or tabeer ki surat deni ha kch phool han jinko chun'na ha or haar ki surat deni ha kch log han ujrra dil wala unko bhi muhabat deni ha kuch apni neend baki ha... jisa bantna ha kuch logon ma unko bhi to rahat deni ha a umar-e-rawan! ahista chal... abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...!!!
mein ise edit kerta hoon tab dekho kitni easily read ho raha hai..
kuch khawab hein jinko likhna hey or tabeer ki surat deni hey kuch phool hein jinko chun'na hey or haar ki surat deni hey kuch log hein ujrra dil wale unko bhi muhabat deni hey kuch apni neend baki hey... jise bantna hey kuch logon me unko bhi to rahat deni hey aey umar-e-rawan! ahista chal... abhi khasa qarz chukana hey...!!!
I m not trying to be oversmart but i think is tarah easily read hojaega aur jise intrest nahi bhi ho ga aur kabhi koi lines nahi bhi read ki hogi woh bhi samjhega.. ki kya likha hua hai..