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dua	10-10-2008 08:55 AM

hiding the pain

hiding the pain
when i smile at u,
its the other side of me
hiding the pain in my eyes
i want to have ur heart
but u won"t let me
its heard to hold my tears
i AM HERE TO CARE
and comfarts u
its ur heart i wnt to win
iwon"t be happy
i just knw i want u
and may be someday u will want me

BSIT07-01

11-10-2008 12:17 PM

Re: hiding the pain

Good..
But I think some lines are missing. Isn't it so?

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