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snowwhite 31-12-2010 08:08 PM

"Ay nye saal bata,tujh mai naya kia hai akher"
 
ay nye saal bata,tujh mai naya kia hai akher
her tarf khaq ne q shor macha rakha hai??
roshni din ki wohi, taron bhari raat wohi
aaj ham ko to nazer ati hai her baat wohi
asman badla hai na badli ye afsurda zameen
eik hindasy ka badlna koi jidat to nahi
aglay berson ki terha hon gay qareeny tere
kisy maloom nahi 12 mahinay tere
besabab dete hain q log mubarak badean
sab hi kia bhool gye waqat ki karwi yadean
tu nea hai to dikha subh nai sham naie
werna in ankhon ne dekhy hain nye saal kae!

WantSmile 05-01-2011 05:38 PM

Re: "Ay nye saal bata,tujh mai naya kia hai akher"
 
very nice............and different

thanks

bonfire 05-01-2011 06:35 PM

Re: "Ay nye saal bata,tujh mai naya kia hai akher"
 
Good.

snowwhite 06-01-2011 03:34 PM

Re: "Ay nye saal bata,tujh mai naya kia hai akher"
 
Kiran mera khyal hai ap ko poetry buht pasand hai, muje khud bhi buht pasand hai...chlean ab ap a gaen hain to maza aye ga wo kehty hain na k"khob guzery gi jo mil bethean gy diwany do"..:)

WantSmile 06-01-2011 03:48 PM

Re: "Ay nye saal bata,tujh mai naya kia hai akher"
 
thanks for your words.....

achi poetry meri kamzori hai..............baqi jahan tuk dewangi ka taluq hai to is pe bat ho skti hai....
waqt insan ko kahan say kahan lejata hai.... kia say kia bna deta hai.....koi kuch nhi keh skta...bus hairan ho skta hai

apki poetry posts ka intizar rahega...
all the best

snowwhite 06-01-2011 03:53 PM

Re: "Ay nye saal bata,tujh mai naya kia hai akher"
 
lolzzzz... mai poetry ki diwangi ki baat ker rhi thi......:)

WantSmile 06-01-2011 04:00 PM

Re: "Ay nye saal bata,tujh mai naya kia hai akher"
 
chlo aik hi baat hai....................wo be to andr say hi niklti hai........
koi ksi qism ka dewana koi ksi qism ka................

---------- Post added at 04:00 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:56 PM ----------

jab ap say tafseeli bat hogi to andaza ho jayega

bonfire 06-01-2011 10:57 PM

Re: "Ay nye saal bata,tujh mai naya kia hai akher"
 
Aray My entry.

Mujay to poetry bilikup pasand nahi Lakin upper par kar maza ah gaya.:)


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