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''kherki,chand,kitaab or mai'' khirki,chand,kitaab or mai mudat se eik baab or mai shab bhar khelean apas main do ankhaen,ek khwab or mai mouj or kashti sahil per... derya mai gerdaab or mai shaam,udasi,khamoshi.. kuch kanker,talaab or mai her shab pakeray jatay hain gehri neend,kitaab or mai |
Re: ''kherki,chand,kitaab or mai'' gehri neend a rahi hai tou kitaab kal read kar laina hahahahahahhaha |
Re: ''kherki,chand,kitaab or mai'' Oh my god...................... Aisi achi shayiri pe ye comments............. Shayiri parh ke to aank mai aansoo tair gaye..aur comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is not fair mr. Salman...agr smj nu arahi ho to khamosh rehna hi behter waqyi barhon ne khoob kaha hai, aadmi ki aql uski zban k peechay hoti hai well done snow white.........really great |
Re: ''kherki,chand,kitaab or mai'' thank u so much kiran....nd yr Mr. salman poetry per asay he comment kerty hain khear ab to kafi arsay se araam hai..:) |
Re: ''kherki,chand,kitaab or mai'' Acha.... mjay maloom nhi thaa...khair.....lekin mujay acha nhi lga...shayid likne waley ka dil toot jaye anyway...keep it up...i would love to read more like this waiting........ |
Re: ''kherki,chand,kitaab or mai'' is qadar ajnabi andaz sy kiun daikhta hai main wohi hon tera kirdaar fasanay wala |
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