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Ujaale apni yaadon ke humare sath rahne do Ujaale apni yaadon ke humare sath rahne do na jane kis gali main zindagi ki sham ho jaye koi haath bhi na milayega jo gale miloge tapak se ye naye mizaj ka shahr hai zara fasle se mila karo koi phool dhoop ki pattiyon mein hare riban se bandha hua ye ghazal ka lahza naya naya na kaha hua na suna hua makaan se kya mujhe lena makaan tumko mubark ho magar ye ghaas wala reshmi kaleen mera hai kisne jalaayee bastiyan baazar kyon lute main chaand pe gaya tha mujhe kuchh pata nahi sar jhukaoge to patthar devta ho jayega itna mat chaho use wo bewafa ho jayega nazar se guftgu, khaamosh lub tumhari tarah ghazal ne sikhe hain andaaz sab tumhari tarah pahli bar nazaron ne chaand bolte dekha hum jawab kya dete kho gaye sawalon main aankhon ki kishtiyon mein safar kar rahe hain wo jin doston ne dil ke safine duboye the |
Re: Ujaale apni yaadon ke humare sath rahne do dear please poet ka naam bata dain ... ya site bata dain jahian say app ne yey li hai ... parhi hai etc |
Re: Ujaale apni yaadon ke humare sath rahne do Quote:
kia hua? koi mistake hay kia:brutal55vp0: |
Re: Ujaale apni yaadon ke humare sath rahne do no no koi mistake nai ,, hai ,, muje 4 months phelay kisi nay yey sher sunaya tha only first one ,, aur kaha tha k yey sher k kisi apne ka hai ... tu app ne ajj pori ghazal post kar dali jab k us ka wo apna tu proffesional poet nai ... lihaza app poet ka naam btao main ne us ko jhoota sabit karna hai ...aur us ki thori buta basti bhi karni hai ,,.. ab app yey na kheyey ga k app ko nai pata warna main basti + jhotha karun ga kaise sabit usay ya phir rehnay dun ......? |
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