zamanay mai bhi dhundo gay to ham sa ho nahi sakta
 

zamanay mai bhi dhundo gay to ham sa ho nahi sakta
sada us ko hi chahay dil, jo apna ho nahi sakta
buht ujra hoa dil hai mager apna aqeeda hai
jahan mehkean teri yadean wo sehra ho nahi sakta
kisi ki yaad ab bhi raat bhar sonay nahi deti
shab-e-tanhaei se keh do, mai tanha ho nahi sakta
kuch apni bhi khtaen thean wabaal-e-zindgi k sath
sabhi kuch hi muqader ka likha to ho nahi sakta
juda ho ker bhi dono jee rahay hain eik mudat se
kabhi dono he kehtay thy k aisa ho nahi sakta

Re: zamanay mai bhi dhundo gay to ham sa ho nahi sakta
 

bht pyari ghazal hai......thanks

1. second last sher mai "to" ko 'likha' say pehle ana chahiyay, tabhi qafia radeef teek hoga

2. 59 ne read kee ghazal aur ksi ne comments nhi die........dek len
hamare nu hone say kitna farq parh jata hai....

Re: zamanay mai bhi dhundo gay to ham sa ho nahi sakta
 

ager to ko pehlay likha jaye to wazn theek nahi rehta, I dont knw theek kia hai bkoz ye muje kisi ne sms ki thi, so......

or mai yahan per comments k lye upload nahi kerti hon, koi ker de to theek na keray to bhi theek......:)

Re: zamanay mai bhi dhundo gay to ham sa ho nahi sakta
 

ji bilkul...................kia farq parhta hai

aur wazn mera khyal hai k khrab nhi hoga..............."fit" hi rahega misra
haan is halat mai Qafia "unfit" ho gya hai...............anyhow....is say be apko kia 'farq' parhta hai......................

Re: zamanay mai bhi dhundo gay to ham sa ho nahi sakta
 

muje to khear farq nahi perta but aap ko galt lag raha hai to chlean mai theek ker don gi....:)

Re: zamanay mai bhi dhundo gay to ham sa ho nahi sakta
 

shukria nawazish....................:yahoo: