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WantSmile 15-02-2011 02:22 PM

Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!!
 
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Aik bekar si diwar gira di mene
door tak chandni angan ma bicha di mene

kaghzi phoolon ka guldan mehek uth'ta tha
phir wahan say teri tasweer hata di mene

har nye gham pe nya zabt ka pathar rakha
or bhi dard ki diwar utha di mene

baat bas ye thi k poocha to bhut pehle ke
apne ik pyar ki tafsil bta di mene

teergi or ubhar ayi thi mre ghar ki
shamma nadim thi so chupke sa bujha di mene

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snowwhite 15-02-2011 05:36 PM

Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!!
 
eik deewar gira di or eik utha di...wah wah wah.....or aj to spelling bhi thek likhy hain...shabash :Clap:

WantSmile 15-02-2011 05:48 PM

Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!!
 
haan ji................lagta hai aap ki tawaju CONSTRUCTION par hi tiki rahi...eenton ki gira dee, dard ki uta dee...farq deken

baqi be deken na...second sher mera favrt hai sb say

snowwhite 15-02-2011 06:25 PM

Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!!
 
hmmm 2nd or 3rd sher buht achay hain bt 3rd mai..."or be dard ki diwaar ki jaga "or pher" nhi ana chahye kia......

WantSmile 15-02-2011 06:29 PM

Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!!
 
ab ye poochna parhega shayir say...kiunke maine direct unki kitab say hi likki hai..

lekin i think k theek hai.......kch to pehle say hi theena, us ne aur uthaa dee..simple

snowwhite 15-02-2011 07:07 PM

Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!!
 
acha to ye "or bhi dard" tha...mai kab se esay bedard parh rahi thi...:)

WantSmile 15-02-2011 07:10 PM

Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!!
 
shabash hai ap pe................................
ainak laake doon ya ........................

snowwhite 15-02-2011 07:14 PM

Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!!
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by WantSmile (Post 30627)
ainak laake doon ya ........................

ya apnay spelling theek ker lon......?

I think second kam ziyada behter rahy ga

WantSmile 15-02-2011 07:16 PM

Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!!
 
khud hi to kaha spelling teek hain........
tobbbaaaaaaa........girgit ki tarha rang badalti ho


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