Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!! ============================= Aik bekar si diwar gira di mene door tak chandni angan ma bicha di mene kaghzi phoolon ka guldan mehek uth'ta tha phir wahan say teri tasweer hata di mene har nye gham pe nya zabt ka pathar rakha or bhi dard ki diwar utha di mene baat bas ye thi k poocha to bhut pehle ke apne ik pyar ki tafsil bta di mene teergi or ubhar ayi thi mre ghar ki shamma nadim thi so chupke sa bujha di mene ============================= |
Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!! eik deewar gira di or eik utha di...wah wah wah.....or aj to spelling bhi thek likhy hain...shabash :Clap: |
Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!! haan ji................lagta hai aap ki tawaju CONSTRUCTION par hi tiki rahi...eenton ki gira dee, dard ki uta dee...farq deken baqi be deken na...second sher mera favrt hai sb say |
Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!! hmmm 2nd or 3rd sher buht achay hain bt 3rd mai..."or be dard ki diwaar ki jaga "or pher" nhi ana chahye kia...... |
Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!! ab ye poochna parhega shayir say...kiunke maine direct unki kitab say hi likki hai.. lekin i think k theek hai.......kch to pehle say hi theena, us ne aur uthaa dee..simple |
Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!! acha to ye "or bhi dard" tha...mai kab se esay bedard parh rahi thi...:) |
Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!! shabash hai ap pe................................ ainak laake doon ya ........................ |
Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!! Quote:
I think second kam ziyada behter rahy ga |
Re: Ghazal ----- One of my most favrit !!!!!! khud hi to kaha spelling teek hain........ tobbbaaaaaaa........girgit ki tarha rang badalti ho |
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