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Madiha Fatima 15-10-2008 03:59 PM

abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...
 
kch khawab ha jinko likhna ha
or tabeer ki surat deni ha
kch phool han jinko chun'na ha
or haar ki surat deni ha
kch log han ujrra dil wala
unko bhi muhabat deni ha
kuch apni neend baki ha...
jisa bantna ha kuch logon ma
unko bhi to rahat deni ha
a umar-e-rawan!
ahista chal...
abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...!!!:smile:


Muzammil 15-10-2008 10:50 PM

Re: abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...
 
i think its hey not ha

anyways nice share..

thanks..

Madiha Fatima 16-10-2008 11:08 AM

Re: abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by emsplanet (Post 2459)
i think its hey not ha

anyways nice share..

thanks..

ma to hmesha 'ha' likhti hun na k 'hey'.:deal:

BSIT07-01 16-10-2008 12:54 PM

Re: abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...
 
Laro Laro...
Waisay iss tarah bhi tu likhtay hain "Hay" But India walay tu "He" bhi l;ikhtay hain...

Madiha Fatima 16-10-2008 02:34 PM

Re: abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by BSIT07-01 (Post 2471)
Laro Laro...
Waisay iss tarah bhi tu likhtay hain "Hay" But India walay tu "He" bhi l;ikhtay hain...

han dekho kesa khush ho raha ho larai pa.wesa hamna larai to ni ki.mena to bas itna btaya ha k ma esa hi likhti hun...:happydance:

Muzammil 16-10-2008 04:30 PM

Re: abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by BSIT07-01 (Post 2471)
Laro Laro...
Waisay iss tarah bhi tu likhtay hain "Hay" But India walay tu "He" bhi l;ikhtay hain...

zaroori nahi hai.. per kuch to difference hona chahiye ha aur hey me.. aur meine larne wali koi baat nahi ki to larai kyon hogi.........bus chota sa suggession diya tha..

Quote:

Originally Posted by madiha (Post 2475)
han dekho kesa khush ho raha ho larai pa.wesa hamna larai to ni ki.mena to bas itna btaya ha k ma esa hi likhti hun...:happydance:

like... dekho agar tum hey aur ha ek hi tarah type karogi to kaise ho jayega..

kch khawab ha jinko likhna ha
or tabeer ki surat deni ha
kch phool han jinko chun'na ha
or haar ki surat deni ha
kch log han ujrra dil wala
unko bhi muhabat deni ha
kuch apni neend baki ha...
jisa bantna ha kuch logon ma
unko bhi to rahat deni ha
a umar-e-rawan!
ahista chal...
abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...!!!:smile:

mein ise edit kerta hoon tab dekho kitni easily read ho raha hai..

kuch khawab hein jinko likhna hey
or tabeer ki surat deni hey
kuch phool hein jinko chun'na hey
or haar ki surat deni hey
kuch log hein ujrra dil wale
unko bhi muhabat deni hey
kuch apni neend baki hey...
jise bantna hey kuch logon me
unko bhi to rahat deni hey
aey umar-e-rawan!
ahista chal...
abhi khasa qarz chukana hey...!!!:smile:

I m not trying to be oversmart but i think is tarah easily read hojaega aur jise intrest nahi bhi ho ga aur kabhi koi lines nahi bhi read ki hogi woh bhi samjhega.. ki kya likha hua hai..





BSIT07-01 16-10-2008 05:46 PM

Re: abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...
 
Chalo nahi larna tu na laro...
Waisay Dear Emsplanet (Itna Bara Planet Aik chhoti si site par) ...
Aap bhi Ghalti kar gaye ho na !

Madiha na likha tha
Quote:

jisa bantna ha kuch logon ma
Aur Aap nay lika hay
Quote:

jise bantna hey kuch logon me
Tu "mein" bhi tu iss tarah likhna hota hay...:2funny:

Muzammil 18-10-2008 12:01 AM

Re: abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by BSIT07-01 (Post 2477)
Chalo nahi larna tu na laro...
Waisay Dear Emsplanet (Itna Bara Planet Aik chhoti si site par) ...
Aap bhi Ghalti kar gaye ho na !

Madiha na likha tha


Aur Aap nay lika hay


Tu "mein" bhi tu iss tarah likhna hota hay...:2funny:

Haan bhai insaan hi hoon kabhi kabhi hojata hai..

aur bohot dikkat hoti hai.. itni choti si site me aane ke liye.. itne bade planet ko..per kya karoon?:evil:.. per mujhe yeh section pasand aaya.. thanks to BZU [owner of site]..nahi to itna time ab me kisi non webmaster sites per nahi deta.. apni bhi nahi..

Madiha Fatima 18-10-2008 02:25 PM

Re: abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by emsplanet (Post 2502)
Haan bhai insaan hi hoon kabhi kabhi hojata hai..

aur bohot dikkat hoti hai.. itni choti si site me aane ke liye.. itne bade planet ko..per kya karoon?:evil:.. per mujhe yeh section pasand aaya.. thanks to BZU [owner of site]..nahi to itna time ab me kisi non webmaster sites per nahi deta.. apni bhi nahi..

han khud ghalti kro to koi ni,dusron ki ghaltean har koi pakarta ha.ab ma jan boojh k ghalat likha krun g....:muscle:

Muzammil 19-10-2008 02:22 PM

Re: abhi khasa qarz chukana ha...
 
:embarrassed:


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